17A- Elevator Pitch No. 2
1) Link to video: https://youtu.be/FtvCl67ZmUs
2) I received mostly positive feedback on my last elevator pitch. People appreciated my idea, as well as my professionalism. A comment about me being well dressed stressed how important it is to sell yourself as well as your product- because they do come together in buisness. Another comment reinforced this, they said that they felt that there is a lot of mistrust in this market, but that they would trust me. Since so few people are knowledgable about this stuff, it takes a level of trust to sell to them. A couple people made comments that they thought that older generations would appreciate this product most. This was surprising because, while I saw them as a key part of my consumer base, older people were definitely not the main target of my original pitch. The last comment that I really thought was meaningful was one pushing me to start the buisness sooner rather than later. This is an emerging market, and it pays to get in early when the buisness is still new and growing.
3) The changes I made weren't huge, but I thought that they made a good impression the pitch's overall focus. I changed it a bit to be a little more relatable, and a little more personal- in order to establish more trust between consumers and myself. I stressed how new this market was, and how it's hard to find other people who are willing to help the consumer. I also added a line or so that I hope will make the product more marketable to the elderly.
2) I received mostly positive feedback on my last elevator pitch. People appreciated my idea, as well as my professionalism. A comment about me being well dressed stressed how important it is to sell yourself as well as your product- because they do come together in buisness. Another comment reinforced this, they said that they felt that there is a lot of mistrust in this market, but that they would trust me. Since so few people are knowledgable about this stuff, it takes a level of trust to sell to them. A couple people made comments that they thought that older generations would appreciate this product most. This was surprising because, while I saw them as a key part of my consumer base, older people were definitely not the main target of my original pitch. The last comment that I really thought was meaningful was one pushing me to start the buisness sooner rather than later. This is an emerging market, and it pays to get in early when the buisness is still new and growing.
3) The changes I made weren't huge, but I thought that they made a good impression the pitch's overall focus. I changed it a bit to be a little more relatable, and a little more personal- in order to establish more trust between consumers and myself. I stressed how new this market was, and how it's hard to find other people who are willing to help the consumer. I also added a line or so that I hope will make the product more marketable to the elderly.
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